Then and Now
By Starfish Girl
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Sad indeed.
Sad indeed.
Enjoyed reading this.
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Intriguing, thought-provoking
Intriguing, thought-provoking. You have the children's 'voicce' well captured.
Hopefully it won't get so bad, or only temporarily. And we are promised the earth will be remade one day. Reminds of concerns over inner-city children who had never seen a cow, or sheep, though now there are some inner-city farms. It can still be surprising even for those in country towns to find how big a cow is! rhiannon
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A sad tale, and the voices of
A sad tale, and the voices of the narrator and children are so well done.
Let's hope it doesn't come to this although, when you think of the species we have already lost, it doesn't look good.
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Well told, and sadly, all too
Well told, and sadly, all too believable.
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throwing pebbles
Good story and well told, took me back to my childhood- picking up pebbles and throwing them onto the sea.
And then the shock- reality, very scary could well be our future.
& Nolan
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I'm Captured in the moment Star*
Very relevant in a near future sense, even now in some places, a story of stories told & yet to be told and sooo well done. Cherry's well deserved*
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Hi Lindy
Hi Lindy
Lovely but very sad and hopefully not true in the future story. How awful life would be without the lovely colours of nature You write so well.
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