agriphila straminella

Cherry

By Di_Hard

Fri, 21 Jul 2023
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14 comments
 

"... rather plain looking....

Habitat : Grassy areas almost anywhere...

...easily disturbed"

 

 with silk-cool shock, they rise

pale as ghosts of yellow birch leaves

making wind of memory and promise

 

perhaps afraid of falling into Earth's deep sleep

tiny wings like questions flicker always

through a tangle of tall equal signs

where nothing is straight forward

till cold's answer takes flight

 

that they came to be

is proof of miracles

Certificate U
Poem

Comments

Submitted by Turlough on

Wonderful words.

I particularly liked...

'through a tangle of tall equal signs'

Such a good way to describe grasses.

Nice one Di!

Turlough

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Hullo :0) Thankyou so much for reading, and giving your time to comment so kindly Turlough! I hope you are not having the really hot weather in Bulgaria?

 

Submitted by Turlough on

We've been having afternoon temperatures between 35 and 40 degrees every day for two weeks and they're forecasting that it will remain the same for the next two weeks at least. 

But I like this weather, as long as I'm not expected to do anything.

I hope you're happy with your weather too. 

Turlough

Submitted by Di_Hard on

:0) Glad it is ok for you! I remember the first poem you put on ABC about how even the bees were too hot - I always think of you as surrounded by sunflowers:0) Weather here is much cooler, feels like Summer is done for this year

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

As beautiful and delicate as the moths themselves (which I had to google). Lovely to see another poem from you Di!

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou! A kind person gave me something which helped me sleep a bit better so I could catch the words :0)

 

Submitted by marandina on

"...tiny wings like questions flicker always.."

 

"That they came to be

is proof of miracles."

 

A Di poem is a symbiotic meeting with nature. Yes, delicate and nuanced. Just lovely [Some of the sentences are shaded. Not sure if that is a formatting thing or just that I am reading on my phone] Paul 

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou very much for reading and your lovely comment, Paul, much appreciated. I don't know about the formatting thing, it is not on purpose

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I think I fixed the formatting Di - it was because you cut and pasted. hope that was ok?

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou so much for doing that!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I'd never heard ofit. So slight. There is a lovely little video of it on Wikipedia. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

you always think of the perfect word, Rhiannon! Slight describes them exactly! Mixture of small and light. There are so many just now that Autumn is starting. That video is BRILLIANT, Thankyou!!! Had no idea they looked like that close up - I don't know what the ones in the woods feed on though as the only flowers are tormentil, and honeysuckle but have not seen them fly high enough for those. Argh, I hope this is them, and not something completely different!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I have never heard of this moth before, but managed to find a youtube video showing this remarkable little flying insect. Your poem describes perfectly its remarkable existence Di.

A great tribute.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Hi Jenny :0) Thankyou so much for reading and commenting, you are very kind! This year have not seen any butterflies at all that I can remember, so it is great these little creatures seem to be thriving still. When the birch leaves start falling is when there are most, here. They are meant to be common, so perhaps if you go somewhere with long grass you might see them?