Yantra Mantra
By Turlough
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Both crossed Europe from afar
To avoid the sort of people that we are
And then we met here
In a bar
Not the sort of thing we do
Strange it made our dreams come true
Right upon the doorstep
Of the Tsar
And the Yantra flows along
All day she sings her songs
And she gets all the words
Wrong
Antique eccentricity
Is what our friends and neighbours see
When they visit us
Occasionally
A house that’s full of junk and cats
Cyrillic welcome on the mat
From a world of madness
We are free
And the Yantra’s winding by
And she drinks her foraged chai
And when I taste it I think
Why?
A garden kissed with colour's our trademark
So picturesque that it might be a park
When they explore it
People remark
Trees and plants of many breeds
Reflect the caring nature of our deeds
And those vampiric little bats
As it gets dark
And the current never ends
Going slowly round the bend
While to our sanctum
We transcend
We move in circles most arcane
Our hates and passions both the same
Without each other we would go
Insane
Folks we know can't comprehend
How lives together we can spend
A little strange but we're
A perfect blend
And by this river I speak of
Friends gave us a gentle shove
‘til unexpected we fell in
Love
Image:
Every image I use is from a photograph I have taken myself.
On this occasion – The Yantra River swollen by spring meltwaters.
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I looked at this rather late
I looked at this rather late last night, and have just come back to it. You have a gentle rhythm, and the contrast in rhythm between the stanzas about yourselves, and the constant flow of the river close by. You clearly are happy in your home and situation and marriage, and in welcoming others in, and have enjoyed indicating that in your piece. Rhiannon
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Hi Turlough,
Hi Turlough,
the narrative in your poem drew me in right from the beginning, how fate brought you together, the many experiences you've shared, and many friends you've made along the way.
A great eulogy to the love of your life and also the life you've created together.
A life to be proud of for both of you...long may it continue.
Jenny.
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perfect :0) I like how you
perfect :0) I like how you link the river with love, made me think of that saying : you can't stand in the same river twice, that every day with someone you love must be differently new and wonderful.
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a love story of sorts, you
a love story of sorts, you your cats and a river or two, but it's that old mantra, your women made you.
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