Afternoons Without Spoons
By Ewan
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He does not care for his thinning hair,
or jokes about his solar panel
from men with still more pate displayed.
While losers talk of gambles made,
the wise and silent enjoy the shade
and cool, cheap and calming beer,
remembering who died last year.
Hills disappear into summer haze,
tarmac dissolves into shining
pools where krakens could yet be.
He does not care for his Spanish lair,
or talk about the shopping channel
from those with still less money to spend.
These afternoons that cannot end,
measured not in spoons, my literate friend,
but coffee grains spilled in pooling beer,
and arid hours of desperate cheer.
Days disappear in summary pills,
the blues dissolved in dining
rooms where lovers could still be.
They do not care for his bitter stare
or how his trousers remain flannel
in spite of heat that soon will melt
the plastic of his chinese belt.
Their raging hatred remains heartfelt;
scalding words in a last incendiary beer,
they wonder why he and they are here.
Phils’ Septembers with hispanic Mays,
the Jeans caress their younger, whining
knights where caballeros would once be.
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I think I said the last time,
I think I said the last time, no spoons, but probably seasons and football is how my life was measured. Fling hatred into the hat and you've half a story.
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A mosaic of eclectic humour,
A mosaic of eclectic humour, like looking at a handful of colourful photographs held together with a theme, getting older?
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Well, I'm glad you did post
Well, I'm glad you did post it Ewan; and I could discern a story - the expat in Spain maybe? And the tone reminded me a bit of Eliot - the measuring out in spoons was a great line.
Dougie Moody
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2nd last prize
I think the poem is very good Ewan. I once had a dream I was at a boy scout camp and all the kids were in a long row but the kids kept on pushing in and I ended up last, well, second last. They started dishing but now starting by me at the end of the line, down to the start.
I think you actually came first in that competition.
All the best! Tom
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