Fixing the calendar

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 01 Mar 2024
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One hour lost in Spring,
in autumn found again!
and every year it take us six
hours more
to circuit our sun
than our calendars say,
so,
in order to fix
the progressing problem,
in one year in four
we have an extra day
– in February!

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Very nicely explained Rhiannon - I can't wait for the clocks to change!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Not long! My mother could never change her digital watch and kept it until we came up, and sometimes it stayed right through. I tend to forget how to do my watch from year to year! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

And thank you for the cherries! It was a bit of fun trying to sort it out briefly in my head! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Really good explaining poem! Loved your rhymes and rhythm :0)

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you. I think I was trying to explain it to myeself and remember the explanation! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Great poem for kids/ teenagers Rhiannon, they could even memorise it! Nolan &

 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Nolan. My verse writing started with things my children wanted to remember, years ago! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Kris on

A gifted poet makes it so simple, clear, crisp & clean & fun to read...

ahhh.... I feel better now..

heartkiss Thx Rhiannon.....

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, thanks!smiley Simple, crisp concise brief verse is fun to read often isn't it?! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Kris on

yesenlightened... (fun)wink

 

Submitted by marandina on

A concise, poetical explanation for leap years. There's something magical about a 29th February isn't there? Nicely done, Rhiannon.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you. It does feel like an extra day given, doesn't it?! Rhiannon