"Good Morning"

Cherry

By Penny4athought

Sun, 10 Mar 2024
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18 comments
 

Weak sunlight filters through the tree tops

Across the leaves

blending colors

lime to emerald

dappling the ground

in spots of amber

 

Clouds roll in

blinking the sun’s light

on and off

creating

random twinkles

imitating firefly's magic

 

Temperate breezes

sway moss wrapped branches

rustling leaves

in chorus

to the orchestra

of nature laughing

 

 

 

 

Certificate 12
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You cast a spell of magic over me as I read this irresistible poem Penny.

Every word takes me into nature and leaves me wanting more.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Hi Jenny-- Thank you for your lovely comment- I was looking out my back window and the small forest behind my back yard inspired me to write this. So glad it touched you with nature. I know we share that love of all things outdoor. smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by D G Moody on

A bright ray of sunlight, in an otherwise drab day - thankee best minted coin.

Dougie Moody

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you D.G.- I'm glad it brought you some sunshine. smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

how lucky you are to have such a wonderful thing as a small forest at the bottom of your garden - thank you for taking us there in words Penny!

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you insert; I'm so happy you liked it. smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by celticman on

nature laughs. I smile. 

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

I smile too when nature laughs.smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

How lucky of you to be able to have a lovely sight of a forest in the sunshine. From my back window, at the moment, I can only see a very wet lawn on an overcast day

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

I hope the sun shows up soon for you Luigi. My small, what I generously call a forest, is a large area of trees and foliage behind my backyard thick enough to offer me a private sanctuary.smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by marandina on

"...random twinkles

imitating firefly's magic.."

I hear that orchestra of nature laughing. A charming, liliting, beguiling poem for the season.

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you Paul for that encouraging comment; I'm happy you enjoyed the poem.smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

In a few lines you catch so many aspects of the growing plant life (always love showing the lovely moss coverings!), movement and light twinkles and variation. Lovely. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you Rhiannon for your lovely comment; I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by Nolan on

Wonderful! Beautiful!

Nolan &

In the Spring a young man's fancy lightly turns to thoughts of love …

 

 

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank you Nolan. smiley

Penny4athought

Submitted by Turlough on

Nothing beats a forest for showing off the fine features of the seasons as they pass. Year round entertainment on your doorstep.

Turlough

Submitted by Penny4athought on

Thank yu Turlough.smiley

Penny4athought