Colourful Chorus!

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Mon, 18 Mar 2024
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The daffodils trumpet ‘It’s Spring!’
and celandines sparkle and sing.
The primroses smile in the verge as they peep,
grape hyacinth’s blue bubbles
burst up from their sleep,
majestic magnolia its orbs lifts high
to magnify
the season’s exuberance,
it’s beauty’s abundance,
prolific profusion,
exciting explosion:
explore!

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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you for the cherries! Not to be seen in  Spring! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

... think of them as blossom Rhiannon : ) - this is beautiful and really echoes the bubbling excitement of Spring, especially when it stops raining long enough for us to appreciate it!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thank you. I'm so glad that you felt it achieved that. And yes, I'll think of lovely cherry blossom trees! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Kris on

 Thats a Spring Collection for sure*... just seeing that... made me read it*

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thank you, Kris. I enjoyed putting the photo collage together also! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

A dazzling display in words Rhiannon.You captured all the beauty of Spring.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, for a lovely commet! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

A happy atmosphere Rhiannon, spring and new life. You give flowers human properties, usually it would be the other way round. Most of the words are familiar but “celandines?” Also the ending, it seems a bit out of place?

Been in the dog box complaints and that.

Keep well! Nolan &

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Nolan. I hope you are OK.

Celandines are little sparkly yellow flowers early in spring here that open out when the sun shines, and close when it doesn't. I have a better picture here:
https://www.abctales.com/story/rhiannonw/lesser-celandine

I suppose the ending is just encouraging looking around us and noticing the variety and beauty of the small new flowers bursting out! regards, Rhiannon

 

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Thanks for the link Rhiannon! Lovely photo and the poem as well. They might even be here in the little photos too! Sunflowers also open with the sun and they too are yellow. However much bigger they are grown for cooking oil which can be used for diesel too.

I'm doing fine, yesterday was a public holiday so many people are making it a long weekend. Then of course next weekend is Easter, so things are slowing down a bit. Good for the electricity though, but we expect things will be getting a bit ugly with closely contested coming elections.

I did read you inspirational message last sunday – very good. Complacent, satisfied, and in hard times quick to remember again and run back.

See you && Nolan

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thanks for the comment on both, Nolan! We must pray about your elections. There is bitter politics in so many countries. And we so need people of integrity willing to govern for the good of the people. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by marandina on

"...grape hyacinth’s blue bubbles
burst up from their sleep..."

Such a sweep of colours and celebration. I think it's spring equinox today. Finally...surely....warmer days and lighter nights. I think we are due after all the rain. Adriotly done, Rhiannon. Paul

 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Paul! We must appreciate them when the sun shines! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Absolutely WONDERFUL Rhiannon!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, I'm so glad it gave that response that I know you feel when exploring the flora! Thank you. Rhiannon