Peter finally sits on my lap ((Lap year 2024)
By Yutka
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In the quiet corners of our home,
Peter the cat, a creature of mystery,
for seventeen years danced through shadows,
never one to settle,
never one to curl into the warmth of a lap,
his independence a regal cloak,
a flick of his tail,
a soft, dismissive purr,
as if the very idea of comfort
was a trap he refused to entertain.
Days turned to seasons,
the sun traced arcs across our walls,
and still, he roamed,
a king in his kingdom,
noble and aloof,
the gentle chaos of his presence
filled the air with a delicate tension,
a silent agreement:
you may admire, but do not touch.
Yet, come 2024,
an unexpected thaw,
the frost of reticence melted,
as if the universe conspired,
and suddenly, in the stillness of a morning,
he approached,
with the grace of a ghost,
and settled,
a hesitant weight upon my lap,
the warmth of fur,
the soft rhythm of his purring,
a heartbeat against my skin.
What shifted in this ancient soul?
What wisdom whispered from the corners of his mind?
Perhaps he found solace in the embrace of trust,
or maybe the world outside grew too loud,
and in the sanctuary of this moment,
he discovered the beauty of being held,
the sweetness of surrender,
a lesson learned in the twilight of his years.
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The wonderful mystery of the
The wonderful mystery of the cat - what a lovely poem!
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Oh! I LOVED this :0) There is
Oh! I LOVED this :0) There is a feral cat who I feed, who will touch the back of my hand with his nose, when I put his food down, but that's it. I do not know what his fur feels like as he shies away if I try to stroke him. I love that the cat in your house purred on your lap :0) How you create his character for the reader, and the shift in the last stanza, it is gorgeous
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You give me hope ...
... that one day our cat might sit on my lap. She will nuzzle beside us but has never yet settled on one of us.
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This beautiful poem from
This beautiful poem from Yutka is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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