Rain on Red Earth


By D G Moody
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Outback Australia
I hear the screen door slam, so
The cats out for the night while
In the sleepout I lie on my bed,
the fan syruping the limpid air.
I tap and smoke a Chesterfield;
As the house creaks and contracts
While the night is velvet with moths
Batting unseeing against fly screens
Then a hint of cooler air, bringing
With it an elusive damp scent as
Rumbles of thunder come close to
Herald the arrival - the smell of rain,
To stir the dust of our red dry earth;
Starting first as a soft patter upon
The iron roof, then drumming like
thunder becoming faster and faster.
Rods of bouncing dancing rain to
Call me to stub out and come out
To stand and breath the sweet smell
Of fresh rain mingling with the earth,
Coming again to bless and refresh us.
I shed my sweaty singlet and shorts
To stand naked in cool rain soaking
My skin and I laugh just to be in it.
D G Moody 2025
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Ver evocative of a scene I've
Ver evocative of a scene I've not experienced, such a different climate. Could feel the delight of the rain somehow! Thanks! Rhiannon
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You took this reader right
You took this reader right there - thank you DG
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This is an excellent poem. It
This is an excellent poem. It's very evocative and has some lovely lines. I love the night being velvet with moths, for example. (If you're still editing...a couple of typos - breath, creak.)
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