Love/Life
By aardvark1500
Wed, 26 Nov 2008
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To love and learn to live,
Or to live and learn to love,
To fly atop the quiet truth,
To hover up above,
Many choose the path of love,
Many choose to try and live,
But when we make the eternal choice,
We always forget to give,
Irrational: To give away your love,
Foolish: To give away your life,
Both of which are considered,
The eternal sacrifice.
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i love this. it's possibly
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i love this. it's possibly the best thing you've ever written. i like the "eternal sacrifice" line but you are doing nothing to make grandmama feel better. to fly above the quiet truth? i'm most likely being me again but you'll have to explain that to me. thankyou very much for not having rubbed in your grade. i will try to be better.
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