Poem

Cherry

By Crackersville

Thu, 23 Jul 2009
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9 comments
 

It's New Year's Eve
and I desperately want
to feel you're here,
so I call, not expecting
anything from us,
not caring how you'll take it,
I call because

hanging up on true love
is so you,

and you is all I've ever asked.

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Comments

Submitted by Ewan on
Sorry Crackers', have to take this at face value, it's very good.

Author Page at the 'Zon
 

Submitted by lenchenelf on
Outright admiration and not a little envy that you can pack so much into this, really liked :-) atb lena

 

Submitted by Crackersville on
*weeps* a humorless day, what's next? Will the police confiscate the trampoline my raccoons stole? Luckily my son's platinum trampoline is legitimate property, so you can say I have a spare one. Thanks E & L

 

Submitted by sunshine on
Beautifully succint and evocative. Margot

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new crackersville very good in such few words but it's sad well connected to the point. makes one think is it true!well deserved cherry! julie

Submitted by Crackersville on
No, not your mother son, whatever gave you that idea?

 

Submitted by Crackersville on
julie thanks

 

Submitted by whiskey on
A moving piece succinctly done. Excellent! :-)

Submitted by Crackersville on
whiskey, thanks