THE PINK LADY Updated From 2009-2010

By Cavalcader

Thu, 05 Aug 2010
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The pink lady when I was young
loved playing on the bongo drums
wore a pink scarf like her mum

she thought to her delight
I'll have a go and bang
the gong to-night

In the days of films
Rank organization
at the start of the film

The muscle man came out
swinging his arms
and would bang the gong

When I went to Pride one year
a green car appeared
the driver sitting near the gears
didn't know which way to go
although he knew
the Green Cross Code

Preston Park everything was going on
men in disguises and fancy dress
singing and dancing
high heeled shoes
and long eye-lashes

Suddenly
back came
the man in the green car
but sitting beside him
was the pink lady
with her bouffant hair

Long dangled earrings
swung back and forth

Around her wrist
the bracelet of
'snakes' all in a twist
all he wanted was to bend
and have a kiss

Looking like a star
stepped out
her dress slit up the sides
sat on the seat
holding the bongo drum

Pounding the beat
dum' dee' dum'
between her knees

the dress up to her bum
with the divulging
'low cut' for everyone
Uh' uh' um'

No wonder poor Charlie
forgot his Green Cross Code
his eyes goggled
heart beat so fast!
'dum did de dum dum ...dumm'

Oh! dear my poor ears
set my hearing aid off whistling
I could scream

If I delete previous,I will lose 362 Readings??
all comments and ideas
please, it is 2nd attempt

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Submitted by Jacquelineann on
I really like this, you just need to correct 'his arms', it's got a reall zanny, quick, rush effect and you get a real feel of the time setting, brilliant.

Jax

Submitted by pombal on
I agree with Jac - its got a beat to it - I think google. Could be a word that has too much baggage - unless this is your intention it might be better if you. Try an alternative ... What do you think?

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New jacquelineann Thankyou so much.Your completely right,now tried a change.Can't do to much punctuation.In a hurry. It was an example of when I used to go great friend procession.see it all. But can't be with me this year,I am busy visiting him.But in the paper,after this says,and shows the picture of man d.who took part, "The Rank Organization with a gong,it was cardboard and music played to it,interesting?nymore ideas. Like your's grasp it all so well,and being new welcome.Editor t.cook knows,I can't do all,but great help,and other's to me.Corrected,and want make it more exciting,without to near the knuckle,saying Friend and I meet,in cafe there,do a little dance, big head,love to use my parasol,all remarked and liked? thanks.Julie xx Julie xx

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Pombal Thankyou so much for your kind help I can't do to much punctuation.As Editor tcook knows,confuses me.Friend many years meet at cafe,and into procession watch.Like as I have put. All sights? I want to make it more exciting,without over the top. Ideas and colouful.Please? I fully agree With you, and Jacquelineann so tried goggled, checked dictionary. As you will see comment to her,bit longer. Friend and I do a little dance,I loved a parasol used twit.?No! all liked it.Some photoed us to-gether,is he your husband,no great friend. Friend can't be with me,I am busy visiting him.Any ideas,join in make it more exciting feel free."The Rank Organization" man used to use gong,like I say at beg: of film.But now paper stated d. and gong? was only made or sound by cardboard, music put to it.Think that's right? Got to go.Corrected thankyou,all ideas and words anyone join in please do.Got to go. Thankyou keep writing.Pride is to-morrow. Had I finished this,I may have read it out,permission there, as I know some one can't yet? Not finished. Hubby may go,wet we won't go. julie xx