A walk down the memory lane

Cherry

By petal

Sun, 01 Apr 2012
  • 1472 reads
12 comments
 

Smiled at strangers,
Enacted power rangers,
Cried over silly things,
Dreamt of having wings!
Fluttered like butterflies in the sky,
Gazed at planes flying high!
Always wanted to touch the stars,
Zoomed and vroomed with the cars,
Loved watching cartoons,
Leapt over balloons,
Dressed up dolls,
Scribbled on walls!
Screamed like crazy,
Never felt lazy!
Would love to relive those innocent days,
As i walk down the memory lane!

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on
Nice. I like wroomed with cars.

 

Submitted by petal on
Thank you :)

 

Submitted by hilary west on
Good use of rhymin' couplets in this memory poem that jerks the old noddle!

 

Submitted by petal on
hi hilary, Thanks for the read:)

 

Submitted by scratch on
Well done on the cherries petal. This, like others of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading is so fresh and vibrant. Vroomed with the cars is a classic example - pure joy to read, striking all the right chords. Thanks for posting.

 

Submitted by petal on
Thank you tina:)

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Agree with all that has been said. A small slice of magic;-) Tina

 

Submitted by petal on
Thanks you! your comments mean a lot to me :)

 

Submitted by petal on
hi scratch, Thanks for reading. Vroom was just to add a kiddish tinge! Your reviews really help me grow! Thank you:)

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on
I like the couplets, too. Really refreshing feel and wistful. Well done.

Parson Thru

Submitted by petal on
hi Parson Thru and Richard, Thanks a lot:) richard, I will surely look upon the picture book idea, loved your review! thanks for reading :)

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Petal, this is Sooo Goooood. Really enjoyed the zim and zam of playing with your tam, while eating jam. Richard LP. PS---ever thought of doing a picture book? I think you should try at least one and send it to a print publisher, via email, and NO flim-flam publishers who charge you money to do your book. RLP
Richard L. Provencher