Mightier than the Sword! (I.P.)
By Silver Spun Sand
Sat, 17 Nov 2012
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What fun you could have being small,
if you were just two inches tall;
maybe ride on a snail’s back to school –
make a puddle your own private pool.
Not quite as minute as a flea –
yet invisible, almost, you’d be;
run amok in your sister’s long plaits
then watch as she scratched and she scratched.
If your form teacher kept you behind,
and insisted you had to do lines – say
to pick up a pen would take metal and might,
and his lines take you ten years to write!
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Is this for the IP Tina? If
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Is this for the IP Tina?
If it didn't have your name against it, I'd know it was you. Lovely read. :-)
Parson Thru
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that was fun....especially
that was fun....especially liked the part about sister torturing :) - alvin
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Silver, I liked the 'pool
Silver, I liked the 'pool puddle' too. You have incredible poetic versatility and a prodigious poetic talent. Thanks for posting.
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Hi Tina, this was such fun
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
this was such fun to read and reminded me a bit
of the Thumbalina story.
Really enjoyed and very light hearted.
Jenny.
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It seems easier to love a
It seems easier to love a small person than a giant. I have the impression that small people are good natured, more so than tall or average sized humans. I think it comes from adversity. It's not easy being small- as you very well captured in this poem. Also made me think of Thumbelina- I loved that fairytale as a child. One of my favourites too.
;)Pia
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