What Carlo Did Next
By luigi_pagano
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He knew nothing of Dick Whittington or his cat
or that the London streets were paved with gold.
No, it was something else that he had been told
that motivated my friend Carlo to have a chat
with all the prettiest girls of the English capital
and thought that what he did would do no harm:
he was only trying to exercise his Latin charm,
then learned that their intentions were marital.
But his intent differed and he wasn’t a good sport:
he altered his technique as his resolve was wavy;
he didn’t want to get hitched so he joined the navy
and hoped that he would find a girl in every port.
© Luigi Pagano 2014
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A playful poem Luigi, which
A playful poem Luigi, which I enjoyed reading.
Jenny. xx
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I just joined ABCtales, and
I just joined ABCtales, and hit upon this more or less at random. A really good, fun poem. I particularly enjoyed "... resolve was wavy / ... joined the navy".
I'm looking forward to being a part of the site!
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Now this is fun - the content
Now this is fun - the content and the rhyme scheme.
Enjoyed.
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Yep, me too. I enjoyed
Yep, me too. I enjoyed reading this fun poem and I particularly liked your rhyming scheme which I thought worked well with the playful content.
Moya
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