Sparkling affection

By Rhiannonw

Fri, 19 Dec 2014
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Christmas
excitements crackle –
brittle glitter;
smiles sparkle –
affection,
or affectation fickle?

God’s gift to a world hurt and hard
many can’t fathom, and choose to discard;
but its love that can dazzle, and ours ignite
to brighten our homes more than glitzy delight.

 

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Comments

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

I like brittle gllitter - its even hard to say but certainly gets the message across. A very useful reminder to all those Christmas sceptics in the world.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks Jean, I like my alliterative consonants! and wanted to emphasise how genuine affection to our friends, families and those around is what really makes the season happy. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

A lovely warm glittery poem with a message.

Enjoyed.

Bee

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Bee, glad you enjoyed. Rhiannon