Lost among You

By tibi popovici

Tue, 24 Feb 2015
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6 comments
 

Wonder what should I do,
To please all of you,
But hey, who do you think I am?
Or better, who you are?
Proving nothing yet,
talking a lot, about sense
Where chance is closed
In a madness tense

Let's do it like that,
I will say no word,
Enlighten me please
With your charm sword!
Which you use it like hammer
Tearing down the world.

The fools, like me,
Should listen, only,
While the alpha males,
Like you, talk slowly
About the meaning sense,
Freely, using past tense.

I can listen you forever,
Or maybe not,
Get bored, I may walk,
Away from the smartness
Which makes you easily talk

My lost?
Of course, you believe so
Keep talking!
I can't stay
Somebody will listen,
But not me,
I will be far away.

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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

This is really good and heartfelt, tibi. I get the feelings behind it and liked it very much.

Bee

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks a lot Bee for reading it! Yes, it is covered with feelings, hard to suppress sometimes.

Tiberiu

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Liked this, a lot, Tiberiusmiley

Tina

 

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Thanks a lot, Tina! wink

Tibi

Submitted by celticman on

we can walk away, but words stay and linger. 

 

Submitted by tibi popovici on

Yes, celtic, that's a good point of view.