a red car coming
By tibi popovici
Thu, 16 Apr 2015
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Surprised by stillness,
after a last breath...
changed my confidence
in nothing,
when that amazing,
angry,
sound was coming.
Left along the road,
I could see it,
feel it,
the red flame car
devouring the road,
with you at the wheel,
rescuing me...,
but you,
unbelievable,
you stopped,
in front of me,
rising up sun glasses
remembering me
why it's so lovely
to die.
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Excellent tibi.
Excellent tibi. Congratulations on the cherry award too.
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Like the lifting of the
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
Like the lifting of the sunglasses especially, a touch of glamour.
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