Look Back In Ongar

Gold cherry

By Paul Annon

Mon, 27 Jul 2015
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12 comments
 

I remember...

Back when there were two Germanies,

Two Berlins, two Towers,

Two Ronnies, Two and a Half Men…

I remember…

Tea with Jenny

In our suburban semi,

One of very, very many

Boxes, little boxes, so neat and discrete,

Lining every leafy street,

Laid out like some planner’s treat…

I remember, I remember…

Back when we were

Reckless and feckless,

Aimless and shameless,

Seedy, needy and hopelessly greedy…

Remembering, dismembering…

The wheeling, the dealing,

The schmoozing, the boozing,

The binging, the cringing,

The tweeting, the cheating…

I remember…

All the commuting,

Occasional looting…

Life in the Past Lane.

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This made me smile - also it has the best title I've seen all day!

 

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

Made me laugh. Clever and fun write, Paul.

Cheers,

Rich

 

Submitted by derekpayton512 on

This made me happy. I love the rythym, and your last line really did the most for me. Thank you.

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

A good one, Paul. Love the title. Made me think of Ongar which wasn't far from where I used to live.

Best wishes, Luigi

 

Submitted by Bee on

I enjoyed this too.

Bee

Submitted by loquaciousicity on

A witty little ditty!!!

Submitted by gletherby on

I love this Paul. Thanks for the memories. Gayle 

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Submitted by jolono on

Drove through Ongar on Sunday on the A414. It has fond memories for me...can't say why. Loved the rhythm and rhyme of this. It thunders along at a cracking pace and makes you smile all the way through. The last line is a classic. Nice one Paul.

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Wonderful last line.

Submitted by celticman on

nice one. like the old look back in onger moment. Onto the next stop look back at...can't remember. That's the trouble.  

 

Submitted by simonmiller15 on

but it sounds as if the second half of suburban excess, "back then", might've been more dreamt than was.  Looking back too late in the past lane.  Just the way it breaks.  simon