A horse in a house

Cherry

By well-wisher

Fri, 02 Jun 2017
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A horse in a house
is much worse than a mouse
for it gallops up and down the stairs
then it runs round the rooms
breaking antique heirlooms
and leaves hoofprints all over the chairs.
 
A horse in a house
is much worse than a mouse
for its caught, not with cheese, but with hay
so please take my advice
you may invite some mice
but should never have horses to stay.
Certificate U
Poem
Children's Poems
Children's

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

love the way this sounds, also (I know I often say this about your children's writing - but it's true!) the opportunity for some spectacular illustration

 

Submitted by PoppyS on

This trips the tongue and the visuals are 'huge' very entertaining it opens up the mind to all sorts of fun.

I enjoyed (even though I do have a mouse in the house thanks to one of the cats) :)

Pops ~xx~

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