Sit With Me Quietly
By TheShyAssassin
Sun, 28 Oct 2018
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Sit with me quietly, just for an hour.
Search my face as you hold my hand.
Speak with me of our hopes and dreams.
Remind me of our future plans.
Will we float on a barge down the river Rhine?
Rest by the oasis to eat ripe wet figs?
Will I stroke your hair to still your fears?
Will we find the peace that true love gives?
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I enjoyed your poem asking
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I enjoyed your poem asking those all important questions between two people, very tranquil.
Jenny.
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1 User voted this as great feedback
Nicely paced poem about love
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Nicely paced poem about love and life. Like Jenny says it had a very tranquillizing effect!
Hilary
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