Arrival – Evening Wander

Gold cherry

By Rhiannonw

Tue, 07 May 2019
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[04/05/19 North Pembrokeshire Coastal Path, Trefin]

Evening golden sunlight,
sharp keen sea wind,
wander down to the cliff path,
bright blue sea,
sunshine sparkling on rolling crashing waves,
gentle booming sound.
Spring squill appearing dotted in the short turf
and spreads of pink and white on the walls,
(thrift and sea campion),
as we approach the descent to the cove,
scent of seaweed on the salty breeze,
and evening shadows on the glinting grass:
refreshed.

[Photographs my own]

 

Certificate U
Poem
Coastal Path
Nature
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

What a descriptive snap shot of the sea and its natural surroundings. I love the way you've included sound in this, the gentle booming, also the scent - of seaweed and of course the coastal flowers so beautiful at this time of year. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jane. Yes, all the senses – the sharpness of the sea salty wind felt on the face too! – 'blowing the cobwebs away'! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks for cherries on the scene! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

This one is gorgeous too! In so few words so much richness, I felt I had been there too. Thankyou so much for posting. I will want to read this over and over

Are you on holiday?

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, and yes, we are on a week's holiday. My husband, especially, needed a rest. We love these cliff paths in May with the flowers beginning to come out. Yesterday a little rain, and so a quieter day, but still the lovely countryside around. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Oh! My goodness Rhiannon, this is absolutely beautiful and gives all the senses a treat. Just love those photos too.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jenny, so glad you enjoyed. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

What a beautiful poem!  Trefin!  I know it well and your words bring inot sharp focus.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you! I'm glad you know this beautiful little out-of-the-way place. We've returned here a number of times and find it and the whole area relaxing and beautiful. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

This gorgeous piece is our pick of the day - do share if you like it too.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

So pleased! Thank you, I hope my enjoyment is so shared! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

brilliant choice!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks very much, Di. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by celticman on

refreshed indeed, beauty isn't just in the eye of the beholder. 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Celt. I take it you and other readers have found the beauty and refresment also from reading, for which I'm pleased! Rhiannon