How to catch a laughing owl
By onemorething
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In a midden lie the remains of bats,
once flushed from darkness, snatched
against blackened starlight
under the wing-hush of a laughing owl;
a shadow of a previous existence.
When one flyer is taken by another,
the moon-bright face of one, round,
eye-full, drinking the night's marrow
in dismal glances - it will not be
the owl who is caught.
The last bone-shrieks were lonely,
calls unanswered except perhaps by cat
or stoat, too strange and too late
to adapt a pattern of behaviour,
and would we, if we could, turn back,
reverse even our unintentional sins,
and at our play of might-have-beens
what history should we modify,
before extinction quietened and
we wonder what it is that now fills
each particular silence.
Image of a laughing owl (extinct for about 100 years): https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:The_zoology_of_the_voyage_of_the_H.M.S._Erebus_and_Terror_(6257851283).jpg
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Hi Rachel,
Hi Rachel,
survival of the fittest reads loud and clear in your poem, it sounds like the laughing owl wins the day.
Also you describe the fact we as humans are living on the edge in these scary times, making you wonder exactly what the future has in store.
Definitely a poem that makes you think!
Maybe I've got what you were trying to convey wrong, it was just the way I read.
As always intriguing.
Jenny.
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"and would we, if we could, turn back,
reverse even our unintentional sins,
and at our play of might-have-beens
what history should we modify,
before extinction quietened and
we wonder what it is that now fills
each particular silence. " - This is so poignantly beautiful !
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