Dear Creator

Cherry

By forest_for_ever

Fri, 22 Jan 2021
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Dear Creator

 

 

Dear Creator,

Sorry for the awful mess

And sorry ‘bout your status

Foolish man’s grand design

Has left you far behind

 

His juggernaut of mayhem

Hurtles toward oblivion

Still he reigns immoral

Bigoted, blind and foolish

 

Once creation’s grand schematic

The faded, unused plan

Now gathers dust in heaven’s attic

Man thought he could do better

 

Time to scoff the Humble Pie

Before man seals his fate

Dear Creator, sorry for the lies

Even now, it’s not too late

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Inteersting and hearfelt! Thank you for expressing this.

We long for all to turn, meekly, but first of all ourselves personally!

Actually, of course, that plan is active, but giving us each time to get back into it, and, as you say, acknowldege his status in awe, and receive that love. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by forest_for_ever on

Of course you are quite right.  He still leads me today. A bad day is when I forget to listen and follow.