Sun - Shines

Gold cherry

By Richard L. Provencher

Fri, 12 Jan 2024
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15 comments
 

The sun is probing

morning’s

shabby looking grey-mist

 

a movement of

sunshine emerges here & there

provides enough colour

 

brings gladness

to the scene

highlights sea-gull activity

on busy shorelines

 

where massive walls of

roiling water

shudder noisily

against salty beaches.

 

 

Certificate U
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by onemorething on

Lovely, Richard. (Shudder not shudders in last lines?)

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you for reading my work & the correction suggestion. A-1.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by onemorething on

I found the sensory simplicity of this hopeful and very pleasing. It's our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter.

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

"Pick of the day" a real thrill & very humbling. Thank you for the honour ABC team members. My faltering laptop still can't access Facebook &Twitter to share poem. However I am very happy to still thoroughly enjoy writing my story-poems at age 81.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Yes, very evocative and drawing to the bright light penetrating through the dull mist. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you so much in this delicious new year.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Di_Hard on

so many wonderful lines, really enjoyed your poem, Thankyou! Particularly like the idea of mist being shabby

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you so much for very kind comments. I follow what i read many years ago -- There is nothing new under the sun only new ways to say the same thing. Try it.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

A wonderful little glimpse of warmth on these grey days - thank you Richard and very big congratulations on those golden cherries!

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Your comments are precious - thank you - love those golden cherries.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by marandina on

I could see those gulls and massive walls of rolling water. Such a visual, evocative poem. Just lovely, Richard. I hope you are keeping well. Paul 

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you for such kind comments.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by D G Moody on

A worthy double cherry Richard. I'm all for direct simplicity - show not tell, which here puts me just there on the shoreline.

Dougie Moody

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thanks Dougie for your encouraging words. Golden cherries are really neat. -Richard

Richard L. Provencher