Feedback please

Submitted by Magg on
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I've written two short stories about emigrating to South Africa just after the fall of Apartheid.

I would like to know what you all think.

Thanks!

http://www.abctales.com/magg/shopping_day
http://www.abctales.com/magg/alien_experiences

Cherrypicked!!!!

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http://new.abctales.com/node/545323

Woo Hoo!

I lost my cherry, I mean I got my first cherry!

*Big Smile*

Lisa

Apologies for tooting my own horn and all that, but I'm sooo excited!

Let's Hear It for the Cat! by rattus

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This one keeps you guessing all the way along. It's a lot shorter than some of his other stuff - and still very, very good. The ending I'm not so sure about - there's still some loose ends - but maybe that's good. I'd like to feel more for Edith - to know more about her - but your thoughts?

http://www.abctales.com/rattus/lets_hear_it_for_the_cat

Go for it!

The Second Official Pepsoid Writing Challenge!

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Write a story or a poem or whatever you like really, with the title...

The Duck of Freedom Wears a Purple Hat

Off you toddle, then!

"P"

Styx's 'Maxim for the day'.

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Don't eat yellow snow.

exisitence..like breathing only quieter

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Hello,
Long time since I last popped in, but I moved to Spain and had to wait 6 months to get online.
I am looking for help; I am making a piece of public art for a site in Bow, (London.) It is a traditional looking column with a statue on the top. Only the statue is fed up of standing and is kneeling down staring into the square. On the pillar I want to put 2 pieces of text; one a quote or equation pointing out the unlikelyness and miraculous nature of our existence.

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