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Gold cherry

By Deliberately Evolving

Sat, 12 Nov 2016
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14 comments
 
 
My mind is wearing thin.
Memories seem to fade to nothing 
and I cling...
cling to little repeated clips:
Evening light fading to the sound of laughter,
paints a happy pattern on luscious red lips.
Icy snow, feathery and soft as down,
falls on rosy noses as we lay
backs on the ground,
getting cold in our pyjamas, making angels....
 
Picture fading...
 
Why can't I remember anything?
left with the everyday, mundane;
Birthmark on my foot, splodgy pink flowers,
colouring purple in the cold,
Lines around my eyes I try to hide,
betray my age,
my brother noticed, said I looked old.
Closet looks like an explosion,
(won't ask for help, hate you touching my things).
I sit on my bed drinking 
merlot from a mug thinking 
I ought to learn to play my silent ukulele
then forget
when I remember what you said....
 
"I. Hate. Her."
 
I heard you.
You thought I didn't but I did
and though my mind is wearing thin
and I can't seem to remember anything,
I remember that.
It made me feel like crap.
Certificate PG
Poem
Spiritual
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Comments

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks for the cherries admin. X

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by sean mcnulty on

I really loved this.  I had to read it aloud after reading it in me head.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thank you. When I first wrote it, it felt really abstract. It was an interesting exercise that we had to do to extract the poem.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by VeraClark on

I love this

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Vera

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by celticman on

there's a lot of pain here, brimmng and overflowing words that stain our minds and we have no refrain, because, to be honest, we do the same cruel things again and again. 

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

So true Celticman

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by tcook on

This works for me.Must have been a ghreat workshop.

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Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

It was a fab workshop. It changed the way I thought about writing poems. Thanks for your appreciation. .

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by seashore on

So real, so good

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Seashore.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Seashore.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by ledru on

I love this, fantasitcally personal and intriguing.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.