The sound of my love
By Deliberately Evolving
Mon, 14 Sep 2015
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A bell struck once
peals out a note
clean and pure as
fresh glacial ice
in sparkling sun.
The sound resounds
reverberates,
continues on
long after
you have gone.
chimes and echoes
its melodic tone,
so sounds my love,
my love for you.
Each day as fresh,
each day renewed.
A bell struck -
one note,
one crystal note,
loud and clear
and true
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A good picture - I'm meaning
A good picture - I'm meaning your words! - pretence, or insincerity are lethal to love. Trustworthiness, and straightforward purity of attitude so precious.Rhiannon
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As sound as a bell, this poem
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
As sound as a bell, this poem of yours Ae...and its message rings out loud and clear.
Tina
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there's a kind of coming back
there's a kind of coming back I like, an echo of the past and present, the begining and end.
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A sweet poem. The analogy
Permalink Submitted by luigi_pagano on
A sweet poem. The analogy between lasting love and the lingering, echoing, sound of a bell is very apposite and reveals a true and romantic nature.
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One moment
One moment symbolized by the ringing of a bell, how succinct and poignant, perfect impactful image and idea great poem Ray
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