Sugar

By adbates

Fri, 31 Oct 2014
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Hold me 

Kiss me so very gently

Thaw my cold heart, love

I’ve forgotten what humanity feels like

Remind me how to love

Remind me how to feel

Teach me that not all sweet things

Dissolve 

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Submitted by Bee on

This is sweet as sugar and I do love sweet things. I really felt it needed to go on, though, which could be a good thing, but it feels to me that something is missing.  Like - 

(de da didi da didi da da 

di da didi da didi da. )

I'd like to see a bit more, but I liked what I saw.

 

Bee