Love dies.
By Amanda-Moo
Sun, 12 Oct 2008
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How many times do we do this
Till it becomes too much?
How many lessons must we learn
Before we get the hunch?
How loud do I have to yell
Before I lose my voice?
What argument must I make
Before you make a choice?
I'm walking down all the roads,
Drawing inside the line.
I've used up all my patience
To polish us till we shine.
I think our love is dying
We may as well be done.
I cannot keep on trying
Can't win what can't be won.
I ask you, please stop calling
I can no longer cope
With trying to accomplish
Something where there's no hope.
I'm walking away from you
I will not turn around.
I and both sad and relieved
That we're no longer bound.
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Excelent work! It reminded
Permalink Submitted by PedroJulio on
Excelent work! It reminded me of a past relationship, you really took me there, it flows in the most open and sincere way. Well done.
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i love it. i have, sadly,
i love it. i have, sadly, had more than one relationship that has been like that and you put it perfectly
----Kuno-Chan----
----Kuno-Chan----
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