This weeks forecast

By andrew-evans

Sat, 21 Aug 2010
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The rain falls
going pitter patter in my head,
the grey clouds shroud my mind
and the fog draws in
making clear thinking hard,
I'm hoping for sunny outburst
but expecting heavy showers
with the possibility of storms,
I think the worst thing to get
would be wintery outburst
in june,
making me cold
when the sun returns.
"Thats the forecast for this week,
and following to next week aswell,
thank you for watching."

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Submitted by andrew-evans on
I feel so explanation may be needed here. This is basically my mental forecast, using imagery of different types of weather to reflect what I believe my state of my might be over the next couple of weeks.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi andrew-evans, Well I think you need, sunshine with maybe the occasional shower to wash away those storm clouds, so that the sun can shine again. Very interesting way of describing your feelings, but a bit sad aswell. Hope your weeks ahead turn out better than expected. Jenny.

 

Submitted by shoe on
No explanation needed, although I thought the speech part at the end was unnecessary, liked the rest of it very much,