Blue Night

By Angie306

Mon, 20 Aug 2018
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The night so cold, so calm

Quiet and lonely

The evening is gone and daylight is no more

In my eyes the sadness and sorrow of a lost soul

Wondering where it belongs 

Lonely as the night I've become
There's no place to hide, nowhere to turn to 

 

This moon has turned blue as my mood

Singing songs until dawn about the love that is nowhere to be found

My love, the one that holds me in his arms when the nights are so cold

and gives me strength for the days to come

Whispering those sweet words I long to hear

This one is for you my love, wherever you'll be 

Cheers!

Certificate 15
Poem
Young Writers
Romance
Drama
Love

Comments

Submitted by airyfairy on

What a lovely poem.  Some beautiful images and a real feeling of wonder and longing.  A pleasure to read.

Submitted by Tom Brown on

In my craft or sullen art
Exercised in the still night
When only the moon rages
-Dylan Thomas

I appreciate your poem but staying awake not a good thing. One should sleep at night and be awake in daytime. I've managed to get it right for a very long time now and have regular sleeping patterns.

One always thinks of "Mr. Tambourine man" too. I'm grateful I kicked the habit one works quite as well in the daytime probably better.

This is excellent work it made me think.
Tom

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Early to bed early to rise ... Very wise words indeed. In Proverbs we are told that if you sleep late in the mornings you will be poor and as a promise. Myself is a shining example.

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

You must have updated or something for this to end up on top again. Very appropriate, close to home but night is for romance and courting too.

See you then! Tom