Sundial
By ankari
Mon, 22 Mar 2010
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I was gathering up all the dew,
Night oxygen through my nostrils
Leaving my father's that night.
And I remembered just that one day
and us sitting on the wall
Legs dangling, pendulums in the waving sunset
A romantic at heart I suggest our new start
"Let's spend the sunrise together. The sunset too.
One day soon."
Dreams fade and so did we, but...
How I love the early morning smell of the sun
Rising with the damp and the earth and
theworldjustlikeso.
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new ankari I like this. The
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new ankari
I like this.
The last stanza
Dreams fade and so did we, but..
How I love the early morning smell of the sun
Rising with the damp and the earth
and the the world just like so.Good images here.
My belated pop used to say the best part of the day is sun-rise!I remember going mushrooming way back
got none!wrong time of season.Safe to go on the downs then.
julie
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This is beautiful, just the
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This is beautiful, just the whole... aura of innocence and the beauty of a dewy dawn. I love this one Ankari, (:
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Noah
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