It Doesn't Matter Which...

By Bradene

Sat, 10 Jan 2009

4 comments

Contempt, or is it paranoia?
Your contempt ?
My paranoia ?
It doesn’t matter which,
it’s there etching
like acid etches glass,

eating my ego
until I want to hide my eyes.

How did it happen?
When did your words
register on my retina?

Who are you anyway
with your wicked written wit?
More pertinently
why do I wallow in it?

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Sat, 2009-01-10 13:29

A craftsman at work! You set the standard for all. Brilliant. If this is not cherry picked, there is no god. Chris

Permalink Submitted by Bradene on Wed, 2009-01-14 11:35

Thanks Chris you are very knd. Val x

Permalink Submitted by Ewan on Sat, 2009-01-10 14:00

Hmmm.... think I'll go and read all the comments on your work now, Val. :-)

Permalink Submitted by Bradene on Wed, 2009-01-14 11:36

OK Ewan, off you go then (o: Val