Throwing rocks at shop signs
By span
Mon, 26 Mar 2012
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When I was a kid I used to love Asterix, it was like my thing.
We would go round lane corners yelling beep
dropping poo sticks off bridges,
high fiving soft wood trees,
quartering our ankles in ice streams.
The dirt was all cake.
The old suitcase we found by the lake,
the spider plants bought from church yards,
the cress grown on egg cups sills,
the red bucket in conversation with waves,
meant there was no dark in the woods,
the animals all liked us.
We didn’t know yet about charts,
or how to tell good stories
or care about who liked us.
We ate days like packed lunches
blew seed umbrellas into battle ditches
like those pictures of the wind with chubby cheeks.
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I like it. Made me smile. I
Permalink Submitted by alex_tomlin on
I like it. Made me smile. I might stick an 'h' on the poo sticks though...?
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I liked this very much too.
Permalink Submitted by alexwritings on
I liked this very much too. Great similes, rhymes and images. It definitely stands out.
Alex
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Brought me back to another
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Brought me back to another time and I LOVE writing, that does that. Truly excellent piece; I'll be back...more than once or twice. Well done!
Chris ;)
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I love this poem. Really
I love this poem. Really made me think about childhood (my own and my children's). "The dirt was all cake" has stayed with me all week.
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