Distancing

Cherry

By Bee

Sat, 05 Mar 2016
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15 comments
 

Miles reduce to nought

as we float ephemeral 

as air and light as dust

on passing thoughts,



like gathered clouds

that softly part

from time to time

to let the sun shine in.

 

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

I could identify with this poem Bee, floating ephemeral as air and light as dust on passing thought.

What a lovely way to express a feeling.

Very much enjoyed reading.

Jenny. 

 

Submitted by Bee on

So great when someone can relate to a poem. So glad you did, Jenny. 

Thank you. 

Bee

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thoughts move lightly around such great distances – the picture of letting the sunshine penetrate the clouds or mist  is nice. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you Rhiannon. 

Bee

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

This sounds like part of a wonderfully relaxing meditation

 

Submitted by Bee on

Oh, I'm pleased with that. Thanks insert. 

Bee

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Beautifully dreamy, I smell blossoms.

Submitted by Bee on

That's great! Thanks Philip. 

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

For the cherries (unexpected for such a brief piece) - a big smiley and x

Bee

Submitted by tibi popovici on

I dare to take this literaly, because i find it very interesting, Bee. "As we float", "as air", "as dust", " as thoughts". Hmm, never picture it like that, but makes a lot of sense.

Thanks Bee!

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you tibi. 

Bee

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Bee

Short but lovely sentiments and words.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you, Jean. 

Bee

Submitted by Ed Crane on

This what I aim for when I try to get to sleep. I think you paint a very relaxing image, I loved the clouds opening to let the sun through.

 

Submitted by Bee on

So pleased you liked it, Ed. Thank you.

x

Bee