As I watch you leave.

By Beeme

Thu, 20 Aug 2009
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12 comments
 

The tears are running now,
trying to catch you, because
I am standing, as still as the
dead, watching you leave.

Rise please, the wings of
grace and comfort me today,
for I am weak and afraid, bend
and hold me, as I watch him
leave.

The tears are running now,
trying to catch you, because
I am standing, as still as the
dead, watching you leave.

Rise please, the courage inside
of me, for I am weak and afraid,
of being left alone, give me your
strength, as I watch him leave.

The tears are running now,
trying to catch you, because
I am standing, as still as the
dead, watching you leave.

Rise please, the army of angels
to guide me, for I am weak and
afraid, so please hide me from
all the pain, as I watch him leave.

The tears are running now,
trying to catch you, because
I am standing, as still as the
dead, watching you leave.

Rise please, the voice to shout for
me today,for I am weak and afraid,
and my lips can't form the words,
as I watch you leave.

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Comments

Submitted by pinda on
I am weak and afraid, and my lips can't form the words, as I watch you leave. Must be a very good friend however, did you show them this? I hope you do, it will show how much you love them. Layout is great, love how the first sentence was always matching.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks Pinda, he is a really great friend. I will show him this. I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

k.

Submitted by gristo on
I really like the repetition in this. Has a real sense of loss and devastation. Made me feel a bit miserable and I didn't even know the guy :)

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Submitted by Beeme on
lol aww no don't be sad ;) Thanks gristo.

k.

Submitted by jlp303 on
You truely are a great writer beeme!!!

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so much jlp303

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Beeme Sad but a brilliant writer! I agree, you could record it onto tape and send. I to miss somebody who did so much for me in all circumstances. maybe he or you visit each other. sounds like a soul partner very rare Love repeating!of poem like a chorus How long have you been friends years. bless you julie xx (:-.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks Julie, glad you liked the poem and the repetition. I will visit him:) Aww soul mates we are so close! We have been freinds for a year, not that long really, but like you said he did so much for me when I was in a bad circumctance and we got close really quickly, all friends should be there for eachother through thick and thin :) x

k.

Submitted by russiandoll on
Like this very much, well done.

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks Rusiandoll, I'm glad you enjoyed :)

k.

Submitted by Lennie on
Hey Beeme, I really enjoyed the poem it brought a tear to my eye :), I no how you feel my friend because i have felt the loss of 2 great friends of mine, and i to miss them greatly but after all i havnt lost them because im going to vistit them as much as i can and when you are such close friends it doesnt matter how far apart you both are you still can share the good times with one another because friendship is such a strong bond which if you want it to can last a lifetime, or maybe untill your 30 to start things off ;). Keep up the great work Beeme, you are a great poet and maybe you should reconsider publishing some work in a mag or something. Auf Wierdersehen my friend. Lennie x

Lennie

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you Lennie i'm so glad you enjoyed!! Thanks for the advise and talking on the phone to my friend, makes it feel like they are still hear, close freindship's are always strong no matter wear each of you are in the world. :) x Beeme xx

k.