Sun dial

By Beeme

Fri, 18 Mar 2011

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5 comments

I'm fractured,
propped atop my limbs
navigating like sun dials
anchored...
to the breaking tide of each day.
Fading in diluted light,
a candle dampens after
a prayer is uttered for you.
Dispersing like ash,
black-grey
an invention of darkness.

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This is undoubtedly one of

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Sat, 2011-03-19 12:32

This is undoubtedly one of your best, Beeme. It is very beautiful, and more than well done on the cherry. Tina xx

Nice one Beeme - really well

Permalink Submitted by seashore on Sat, 2011-03-19 13:18

Nice one Beeme - really well done. x

Thank you so much Tina! I'm

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sat, 2011-03-19 21:30

Thank you so much Tina! I'm really happy you enjoyed =] Beeme xx

Thank you very much Seashore

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sat, 2011-03-19 21:31

Thank you very much Seashore :) Beeme xx

Thank you very much

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sat, 2011-03-19 21:33

Thank you very much Sundayschild :)Thank you very much for the cherry abctales