Smashed

By Cameron N

Tue, 30 Aug 2011
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Owww.
It hurts to touch.
Stop.
Don't even come near.
Purple, blue, green, yellow,
a rainbow of pain.
Smashed.
It's all my own fault,
too careless to watch out for my own.
Will it break?
Only time can tell.
I can only hope that, this time, I will be spared the sickness and longing.
Isn't twice enough??
Ouch.
Who knew that a person could love too hard.

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Comments

Submitted by seashore on
this works for me

Submitted by MaggieG on
Hmmmm This intrigues me. It has a very subtle hint of abuse to it, which I personally think is the best way to handle such a subject. You have a rough gem here. I would certainly work on it some more, hone it sharp, and brilliant. Much enjoyed this read.