LOST BUT FOUND

By Cavalcader

Sat, 13 Jun 2009
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OH! YOUNG MAN DO COME IN WITH MY DAUGHTER SO FAIR
HAVE YOU BEEN WANDERING ALONG IN THAT LONG DRESS?
PLUS YOUR FELLOW HAS A WIG? ON WHAT A MESS

I HAVE PUT THE CLOTH ON MOTHER DID YOU WANT ME TO FIND SOME OTHER?
SO YOUV!E BEEN TO A BALL THEN LOST YOUR WAY
HOW LOVELY TO SEE YOU BOTH AGAIN

PUT YOUR LUGGAGE IN THE HALL
AND SIT DOWN BY THE FIRE
LET!S CHAT ABOUT YOUR HEARTS !DESIRES

IT ENDED UP THEY HAD A ROW
AND WANTED TO BE DRESSED UP
THEY FORGOTTEN WHAT IT WAS ALLL ABOUT NOW

"WHAT IS" WEALTH AND RICHES" THEY BOTH SAID
LET!S HAVE A CUP OF TEA AND BISCUITS
TURN OUT THE LIGHT ? AND GO TO BED.xx

Certificate U
Poem
Humour

Comments

Submitted by Jupiter on
Hi Cavalcaderl There are some enjoyable bits in this for me :-) I liked these rhymes : "PUT YOUR LUGGAGE IN THE HALL AND SIT DOWN BY THE FIRE LET!S CHAT ABOUT YOUR HEARTS !DESIRES" and "WHAT IS" WEALTH AND RICHES" THEY BOTH SAID LET!S HAVE A CUP OF TEA AND BISCUITS Keep it up ;-)

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Nice one, Cavalcaderl. Enjoyed this a lot.

 

Submitted by pinda on
Nice work mate. Really liked this verse "PUT YOUR LUGGAGE IN THE HALL AND SIT DOWN BY THE FIRE LET!S CHAT ABOUT YOUR HEARTS !DESIRES" Carry on the good work

Submitted by Cavalcader on
Hello! PINDA Thanks "Gee" No it;s writing group I go Homeless and I take PART READ THEIR SCRIPTS ETC. ALL different people. YES I AM Christian God done so much for me sorry. But Kind comments GO along way with all of them bringing out their talents in all kind of things.New all these commas, dots, and words just have a go. SOME ARE LIFE. SOME IMAGINATIVE. I am GOBSMACKED MY 1st compliment Jennifer. it can mean so much people. OH I AM FEMALE. just reading others works did I say as O.A.P. paid for 3 PUB: CO. you do 3. so many words and lines have count it all. all on hear now on Abctales one only pays for comp; god, then gradually put on my works tried to do. But as new was very hard to understand etc; and comments to do right sensitive way. julie cavalcader x julie x