6. The Seduction

Cherry

By chant

Wed, 10 Dec 2014
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A thousand pages of photocopying
& it is night. You are leaving
the lit hive, stepping out onto
the street. Time to feed. Taller,
harder in the darkness, chilled
classics on your iPod & armed
with a killer chat-up line. A
petite brunette is lolling on
the library steps. Pillbox hat,
gloves, 40s chic. She smiles vaguely.
Do not fear me, you tell her.

@ianjmclachlan

Certificate PG
Poem
A London Vampire

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

killer chat up line is inspired - well done

 

Submitted by chant on

thanks ipf, the chat-up line he delivers at the end of the poem 'do not fear me' is the one dropped by Dracula to Mina in the 1992 movie Bram Stoker's Dracula, probably one of the worst chat-up lines of all time!

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

A menancing sort of seduction, you've remided me, about time I left my lit hive, lovely phrase.

Submitted by chant on

hey Philip thanks for reading & your nice comment. :-)

 

Submitted by bosch on

2nd line "& it is night.  You leave

the lit hive, step out onto

the street."........

 

last line ", you say." which to me is more intimate than "you tell her."

again a good poem, consistently high level of writing

Submitted by chant on

thanks Swep.