I Am Still Me

By cynthiae77

Thu, 01 Dec 2011
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Fumbling through the darkness
I can no longer see the light
I know the sun is there
Though it's rays are hidden from sight

Pictures and sunsets I have no use for
Brilliant colors are all now gone
Within this world
Darkness is my home

Ears and fingertips are all I have
Remembering scenes from another time
Faces, places, colors
Now drawn from my mind

My memory is strong
Within it I still see
More importantly
I am still me

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Submitted by ScoZen on
Hello c77 "...More importantly I am still me..." How right he is.
ScoZen

Submitted by cynthiae77 on
Hi ScoZen For me, that was the most important line in this whole poem :) Thank you for reading and commenting.

Submitted by seashore on
Really good and I agree that the last line makes a strong though poignant ending.

Submitted by cynthiae77 on
Thank you for reading and commenting, Seashore.

Submitted by lavadis on
Well written and the most important lesson that we learn and so easily forget

 

Submitted by cynthiae77 on
Very true, Lavadis. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Submitted by TVR on
Hiya cynth (sorry)... stumbled across this one of yours and I thought it was beautiful, poignant and moving. Deserved to be cherried and many, many more reads. Well done! sue

TVR