Freeedom ..

By denni1

Tue, 11 Sep 2012
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There's a little spider, sittin' in my sink.
I wonder if he's happy, lost or just needin' a drink.
Now trying to climb the shiny walls as l wash out my glass.
I scoop him up, open the door and throw him on his arse/place him on the grass.

(You choose)

Certificate U
Humour

Comments

Submitted by jolono on
Do spiders have an arse, I supose they do! Nice one Den.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Mornin xx the ones where l live do, J !!

Submitted by ItsSteveDave on
Den, your kindness to spiders makes this poem. My version would be, 'there's a little spider, sittin; in my sink/I turn the tap on, now he's wading in the drink' Obviously depending on the size of the spider, but you won't see me scooping one into a glass! ;) Nice poem. Steve.

Submitted by denni1 on
I always let oot the intruders. Bug, bats, beetles, burglars, beez .. xx

Submitted by pom99 on
Aah...nice to see another spider here:). nice one. liked reading it.

Submitted by denni1 on
Thank you, 99. Av got a huge garden, and lots of wee things tumblin around xx plenty room for em aw .. Denise

Submitted by geegogs1 on
Really love the alternate ending. Barry x

Submitted by denni1 on
Thank you, friend xx

Submitted by seashore on
Great little poem, made me smile...

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
This is a very nice poem, Denise. I too try to capture insects loose in our apt and release them onto the back yard. Richard LP
Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by denni1 on
Hello to you xx thank you very much .. big hug