How long does it take, for pity's sake ..
By denni1
Wed, 24 Oct 2012
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I'm trying to decide if it's time to move on
from a place l live in, from dusk until dawn.
The trouble is not of my pay or colleagues,
but rather a strangeness that only l see.
The feelings of drowning in deepest despair
when l think of my life with only me in it, scared.
It's frightening reality looms in mid air.
That place l must run from is under my hair ..
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Oohh Eerr, Den, hope this
Oohh Eerr, Den, hope this isn't autobiographical...
I thought the last two lines were inspired... I'm jealous, wish i'd written them!
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I got it too. Very clever.
I got it too. Very clever. Hope you don't feel like that.
Moya
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