Sum of the storm

Cherry

By Di_Hard

Sun, 07 Jan 2018
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7 comments
 

wind worm winds through

rough woos trees, shatters

these breathing roofs; leaves

scatter. In the aftermath

trunks, reaching equal signs

cross blank sky, for Summer

is fallen, numberless

Certificate U
Poem
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I love how these words tumble over each other

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou, Insert, and for the cherries! And Happy New Year to you :0)

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

same to you Di!

 

Submitted by Kat027 on

This poem leaves me with a feeling of barren desolation., like a sad ending. Nice creation of a strong mood in so few words!

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou Elsie, for your thoughtful comment. Am not sure it's right to write depressing poems. Need to come up with a second verse!

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Yes it is. We just need another word to describe it.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

I think I was in that storm - but don't think I could describe it as well.