Wishing
By Donalvin5
Tue, 31 Jul 2012
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Wishing
The thought of seeing the future
The flow is relentless
The words are unbearable
The speech is uncontained
You strike before you listen
You hurt because you fear
Everything’s perfect that’s what you’d like to hear
Fighting your reality
Winning against all odds
Seemingly this victory will last forever
Even though it never occurred
Losing is not the only option
Though options are narrow
Never fight though you must
Fight a hopeless battle
One day you will see
That you can see
Victory
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Nice structure Donalvin,
Nice structure Donalvin, liked the way it starts with one word and finishes the same way.Some great lines in this.
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