Umbrellas
By Ewan
Wed, 23 Mar 2011
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And the dippy, french-love tune
sings da-ba-da in my head,
though I'm not in Cherbourg,
but Madrid.
Every nyloned spike is turned
in my direction while
the rain is falling mainly
on the plain.
Meanwhile, Moroccans and Angolans
offer me my own weapon:
but five euros for a 50 cent
umbrella?
But the sun comes out - sudden -
splashes mellow yellow on
flagstones wearing rainbows
in puddles.
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Hi Ewan, I really enjoyed
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Hi Ewan,
I really enjoyed your poem, especially the lines:-
But the sun comes out-sudden-
splashes mellow yellow on
flagstones wearing rainbows
in puddles.
I just started thinking of that song by Donovan,
Mellow Yellow.
Jenny.
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I was thinking the same as
I was thinking the same as Jenny. But I think there are more than one song tune in this. Ha. Feels like a test.
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this is great. I feel it is
this is great. I feel it is a very original idea and style.
congrats on a great read!
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