Weak Point
By gingeresque
Wed, 22 Sep 2010
- 1693 reads
6 comments
You are
my weak point
You know that, don't you?
No matter
how much time passes
how many seas and breaths of others
come between us
You are still
the light I swim to
even when I tire
and long to be free
You are the rock
tied to my ankle
pulling me down
and I don't mind
as long as you pull me
into your arms in bed
black sheets collapsing around us
like buildings
in the moonlight
I give into you every time
You know that, don't you?
One year on,
others' hands and breaths later,
you call my name
and I run towards your voice
in the dark
I stub my toe
and stumble on the sand
but I don't mind
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Comments
Tenderly written
Tenderly written conversational style poem. I really like this. :-)
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I love this one too - I
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I love this one too - I agree with what fatboy says
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Richly deserved cherry - :-)
Richly deserved cherry - :-) Gets even better with more reads and love that last stanza. Congrats
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