Growing Up.
By HiddenBehindTheMask
Fri, 12 Jun 2009
- 676 reads
1 comments
As I run across the living room floor,
My hand can barely reach the handle for the door,
My chubby hands reaching up to you,
Here comes the stench another change is due.
My tie is tight around my neck,
Quick,I grab the lunch box I mustn't forget,
Grapping the pencil in my hand,
Awaiting for the teachers command.
Aiming my barbie dolls at the bin,
Dotting cool tattos on my skin,
I'm past the stage of the cuddles,
I'm getting myself into all sorts of muddles.
Adolesence is in full swing,
I'm shouting and screaming at everything,
Whatever you say Im going to rebel,
I'll slam the door even if you'll yell.
- Log in to post comments
Comments
Lovely progression of life
Lovely progression of life from verse to verse. Very well expressed, especially if you really are only thirteen!
Just one point, though - 'Im' should have an apostrophe in it, since letters are missed out in the abbreviation -
I'm
Well done, keep writing!
J x
- Log in to post comments