Revival

A great little poem, I really liked the structure and flow of it. "be it mellow and thoughtful, madness is expelled" Loved that line. M.T.Maitland

to rest on wonderful' wonderful.

That line ("tumbling down..") is beautiful Pia. A lovely piece of work.

Beautiful. I like the dreamy, fragmented quality it has. It invites us to think more deeply about the meaning of the words; to piece its meaning together. 'to rest on wonderful for a moment of simple daydreaming' and it really grabs hold of you with that opening line; 'See the sweet forgotten song' Very much enjoyed.

love this one, Pia...it's like falling down a soft staircase :) - alvin

I love the slightly syncopated style you have written this poem in, Pia; it suits the subject very well. A memorable poem. Tina;-)

I was listening to a piece of music as I read this poem Pia. The words would make good lyrics. Very inspiring. Jenny.

This is lovely, Pia, I read it several times and each time I got something else from it. I kept thinking this line is great but then on a re-read I would latch onto another line. Loved it Moya

This is lovely, Pia, I read it several times and each time I got something else from it. I kept thinking this line is great but then on a re-read I would latch onto another line. Loved it Moya

So good I commented twice. Duh!